tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7490589169757731191.post5719275325385599002..comments2019-08-29T10:54:08.412+01:00Comments on A2Vid2012-SophieD: The Real Pitch.Sophie Dixonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11028716647307402337noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7490589169757731191.post-8852078738251154162011-09-26T09:34:29.079+01:002011-09-26T09:34:29.079+01:00Good to see you're thinking this through, and ...Good to see you're thinking this through, and great blog so far, a much better start than last year which should a good difference.<br />Couple of things to note: your vid analyses lack the basic facts (year etc) as laid out on the examples on my blog<br />Some of the text is light grey and so hard to read.<br />Better not to increase size of words within a paragraph - use bold/colour.<br />Where you've done this it'd as often be an idea to add hyperlinks too.<br /><br />AAARGH...you've still got word verification set to on - please change this!DBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01644270972807155523noreply@blogger.com