Feedback from our first Rough Cut.

The main feedback we recieved from the class mainly focused on how one of the narrative aspects didnt make sense (The boyfriend James had set up a surprise meal for his girlfriend Katie in her own house when he had been shown arriving moments before). They also thought that we should do faster paced editing and although it is a slow song we would be marked down for shot variety. Connor suggested a digetic intro in which we could have the couple having a conversation. Another problem which we knew about already but was pointed out is that the first few shots were shakey as we forgot to use the tripod.